Save the Cat! Writes a Novel: Chapter 1 Summary – The Beat That Starts It All

The first chapter of Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody introduces the core idea that every successful story follows a familiar structure. This structure is called the “Save the Cat!” method. It was first used in Hollywood screenwriting but works just as well for writing novels.

Brody explains that great stories are built on beats. These are key moments that move the plot forward and stir emotion in the reader. The chapter introduces the “beat sheet,” a 15-step guide that helps shape a story from the beginning to the end. These beats are not a strict formula. They reflect the way people experience change and growth in stories.

The Beats

  1. Opening Image
    • A snapshot of the hero’s world before the story begins. It shows what’s missing or broken.
  2. Theme Stated
    • A hint or clue about the story’s deeper message. Often spoken by a side character.
  3. Set-Up
    • Introduces the main character, their world, and the stakes. The hero’s flaw or problem is clear.
  4. Catalyst
    • The moment that changes everything. It kicks the story into motion.
  5. Debate
    • The hero doubts, resists, or hesitates. They struggle with what to do next.
  6. Break into Two
    • The hero makes a choice and enters a new world or situation. The story truly begins.
  7. B Story
    • A subplot begins, often involving a new character who helps teach the theme.
  8. Fun and Games
    • The promise of the premise. The hero explores the new world. This is where the hook plays out.
  9. Midpoint
    • A major shift. Either a victory or defeat, but with higher stakes. Everything changes.
  10. Bad Guys Close In
    • Things get worse. Enemies tighten their grip. Doubts and problems multiply.
  11. All Is Lost
    • The worst moment. The hero hits rock bottom. A symbolic “death.”
  12. Dark Night of the Soul
    • The hero reflects. They face their inner flaw. The truth sinks in.
  13. Break into Three
    • A solution is found. The hero decides to act. A plan is set in motion.
  14. Finale
    • The climax. The hero faces the final challenge and uses what they’ve learned. Change is clear.
  15. Final Image
    • A mirror of the opening. It shows the transformation and new world of the hero.

The name “Save the Cat!” comes from an old screenwriting trick. If you want the audience to like your hero, show them doing something good early on, like saving a cat. Brody uses this to explain a bigger truth. The heart of every story is change. Characters face conflict and come out transformed. This to me, was the most compelling point in the chapter and an area I’m trying to improve upon.

Writing to the beats might seem like cheating and may not be for all writers. For a planner like me they’ve been a useful guide to including the right amount of change into my characters arcs. With all writing guides, take it all with a grain of salt and do what works best for you. There’s more than one way to skin a cat.

Why You Should Read Storm Front: A Gritty Start to The Dresden Files

I just finished Storm Front, the first book in The Dresden Files by Jim Butcher. I’d give it four out of five stars. It’s not perfect, but it hits hard where it counts.

This book pulls you into a world where magic hides in plain sight. The setting is Chicago, but darker. More haunted. Harry Dresden, the wizard-detective at the center, is broke, stubborn, and funny in a dry kind of way. You want to root for him, even when he’s in over his head.

The plot moves fast. Dead bodies show up. Strange magic’s involved. The deeper Harry digs, the worse things get. But he doesn’t stop. That’s what makes him great. He’s not the smartest guy in the room, but he’s the one who stays when things get ugly.

Butcher’s writing is lean. No wasted words. The magic system is relatively clear, with rules and weight. The world feels real. Like maybe, if you squint, you’d spot a demon down a dark alley.

It’s not flawless. Some lines try too hard. A few characters feel thin. But for a first book? It punches above its weight.

If you like gritty urban fantasy with a noir edge, Storm Front is worth your time. I’m already eyeing book two.

Dragon Riders of Mirstone – Dreams of the Lost

I am excited to announce that my short story, “Dreams of the Lost”, has been accepted into the latest installment of the Mirstone anthology. This anthology is edited by Richard Fierce and is a collection of stories from 13 different authors about the bonds between dragons and their riders.

My contribution is “Dreams of the lost” which is about Clive, an aging Warden in the Eternal Empire, who sets out to find the truth behind children disappearing in the peaceful village of Dali. With his dragon companion and company of Marshals, he must find and rescue the children before it is too late.

You can find more information about the anthology on the kickstarter page here, and if you are interested in picking up a copy you can still pre-order.

A Beautiful Moment

A little over a week ago my wife and I welcomed our new son to the world. The experience could not have been better and we are grateful for all the help and support from our family and friends. It’s been an adjustment for us, we have an almost 2-year-old daughter whose routine has been wrecked. The brave girl went to bed with us and woke up with her grandparents. It’s hard to imagine how it probably felt. Despite our best effort, she had no understanding of what was going on, just that mom and dad had left for a few days.

Our fears were that she might be angry or jealous of her brother. He’d be taking a lot of the attention she used to get from us. What ended up happening was beautiful. Her first reaction continues to be her attitude toward the little dude. She hugs, kisses, and tries to soothe him when he’s fussing. It’s been amazing to watch my daughter show love and care for our new son.

It has been quite some time since I’ve posted anything. My last post was way back in March of last year. Here is a brief description of what I’ve been up to.

We sold our house

We bought a house

We moved

And now we have a 2nd kid.

It’s been a whirlwind, but I’ve not given up writing. I’ve continued to meet regularly with my writing group, and while progress has been rather slow, it hasn’t stopped. I’ve outlined and am about 10k words into the first draft of my novel.

Additionally, you may have wondered how submitting Adrift went. I didn’t place, but hey, I finished the story and submitted it! Which is an achievement in and of itself.

Flash Fiction Completed; Initiate Summer Novel Outline

While I am still working on editing and revising Adrift with the feedback from my writing group, I didn’t want to stop creating something new so I decided to write a piece of flash fiction. 500 words later I have a completed my first piece of flash fiction – working title Death of a Wizard (I’m not in love with this title).

I think one of the greatest benefits of writing shorter pieces of writing is the sense of accomplishment. I’ve spent years trying to write one novel and then the next, never really getting to that finish line with any of them. Now that I’ve got two short stories and a flash fiction under my belt I feel like less of an imposter – something I’ve heard many writers struggle with.

Additionally I think there are many lessons to be learned from writing shorter fiction that can be applied to longer forms. Characterization, fore-shadowing, descriptions, and etc. all need to be so precise to keep the word count low. You’ve got to milk every sentence for what it’s worth.

Moving forward I’ve got two projects that I’m going to juggle. In addition to editing and revising Adrift I’ve started the outline for a novel I plan to start writing some time in the summer. I want to give myself plenty of time to plan out and consider the story before I start writing. Which leads me to a few questions for you writers out there.

What works for you in your planning for a novel? What has helped you finish?

Thanks for reading!

Adrift 2nd Draft Completed! What’s next?

Wordcount: 15k

Man it feels good to finish off a draft! I am far more pleased with this ending and am excited for my writing group to get their hands on it. I’ll do one round of edits before they see it – I mostly look for grammar, clarity, and word choice.

Assessing the manuscript as it is now, I don’t think I’ll need to write another draft. I can uplift it through a round of revision based on the feedback I get from my writing group. After, I’m going to send it off to some beta readers. I’ve not had many people outside my writing group weigh in on my recent projects so it’ll be good to get impressions from readers who aren’t writers and who have fresh eyes.

A note on receiving feedback. My approach is always to let the reviewer have an open mic. Let them tell me their impressions, their issues, and their suggestions before weighing in. It can be difficult not to interject, explain, or defend what I’ve written – and I’m not perfect at it – but I think it is vital to get an uninfluenced take from the reader as is possible.

What am I going to do while my alpha (my writing group) and beta readers are reading my story? Well starting my next project of course! I’m hoping to produce a short story, I’ve settled on a structure I want to use and have some ideas on what I want to do with it. No working name, no details yet, but definitely more to come on the short story in the future.

A huge thank you to all of you who’ve been keeping up with me on these projects. It helps keep me motivated knowing that you’re interested in the work I’m doing. Writing is a solitary pursuit but the product is to be shared, to be enjoyed and discussed by a community. Thank you all for being a part of it.

Are you a writer? How do you approach feedback on your works?

Thanks for reading!

Adrift Update #3

Word Count: 11818

Writing slowed down for me this week. Work was stressful and I let it get to me. God bless my wife for being so supportive as I spiraled. I know many published authors are full-time employed and also manage to write, I aspire to be like them. This week missed the mark.

I’m into the last third of the book. This week brought me to some rising action and I’m taking a different ending than the first draft. I made promises in the early parts of this draft that need to pay off for the reader and I don’t think the first draft’s ending achieves that.

My writing group got their first taste of the new draft and seemed to enjoy it. I had some spatial consistency issues in what I sent them. Instead of writing a third draft to address problems, I plan to revise this draft a few times, perhaps even setting Adrift down for a month to come back with fresh eyes.

If you don’t know, I wake up at 5am to write every morning. Some mornings it is a productive time, others… not so much. I don’t have much other time in my day. I’ve found it difficult to focus on the craft in the evenings, though I hope to push through that and use it as another productive time.

If you are a writer, when do you write? What works best for you to be productive?

Thanks for reading!

Adrift Update #2

Word Count: 8913

This second draft is starting to shape up. For context, my first draft was 5,814 words in total and was written in first person from the perspective of my main character. I’d never really tried to write a draft in first person and my lack of experience in it was apparent in review. I’ve now returned to a third-person limited viewpoint and am making ample progress toward finishing the draft.

I’m surprised how, even with a first draft, how much about the story has changed. Some conversations and scenes are not recognizable from the first to the second. A few parts of the first draft simply-put, did not work, and I’ve removed or replaced them since. Do this too many times and you’ve got a whole different story. Adding two new characters also contributes to this.

One of my hopes is that the reader will be able to get lost in the story – like I do when I write it. To me this is a usually a result of great characters, conflict, and beautiful prose. As I comb through what I’ve already written in the second draft, I’ve been editing sentence structure and word choice to uplift my writing. The end result, hopefully, being a polished and complete story. I’m projecting that the ending word count will hit somewhere between 15k and 17k words. This throws it up to the border between novelette and novella.

Once I am finished with edits and revisions with this draft I plan to submit it to the Writers of the Future writing contest. If I overshoot the max wordcount of the competition I may reevaluate my plan.

Thanks for reading!

Adrift Update #1

Second Draft Word Count: 3199

My favorite part of writing this second draft is having the opportunity to expand and polish the world my characters live in. The simple way of putting it is that I get to retreat into my mind and try to describe the imaginary world I’ve made for myself. It’s so much fun.

I plan to include a few more characters. A father and a sister.

In the first draft I felt that the protagonist, Sara Emoc, needed a stronger reason for following through on her role in the plot. She had originally been motivated by “just wanting to do the right thing”. It didn’t match up with the stakes of the story. I plan to combine her motivation of wanting to do the right thing with also wanting to honor her Father.

I also felt that the first draft lacked conflict at certain times. The conflict that Sara faced in the first draft was mostly exterior and I wanted to give her more to chew on emotionally. Especially in the earlier part of the story – enter the Sister. The late parts of the story are a bit of whirlwind. I’m eager to rewrite them and expand on the climax and ending.

A crazy idea I’ve been playing with would also change the story drastically. I’m considering adding a second protagonist whose story would run parallel to Sara’s and intersect somewhere in the rising action. This would be a major change. I’ve gone back and forth on wanting to include it in this second draft. The main consequence would be doubling the word count. This would take me out of qualification for the competition I was planning to join. Choices.

That’s it for this first update. If you have any suggestions for what you’d like to know about, feel free to chime in on the comments.

Thanks for reading.

Writing Resources Roundup

I’ve had a few people reach out to me wondering about the resources I’ve used. I have found these resources helpful in different ways.

Writing Excuses

Writing excuses is a group of Science Fiction and Fantasy authors who’ve spent years talking about the craft. Each episode is about 15 minutes and is a wealth of knowledge for any aspiring author. Some of my favorite recent(ish) episodes: Season 15 Episode 20 Mental Wellness and Writing and Season 15 Episode 5 Setting Goals for your Career.

Modern Manuscript Format

I ran into this website when I found it listed under Clarkeworld’s Submission guidelines. If you are wondering, yes I did submit Mother and Mist, more on that in a future post. One note: Make sure you actually read the text of body within the template. The first time I visited I just looked at the headings and general formatting of the document, turns out, the body of the document contains a bunch of important details. Luckily I caught it before I submitted.

Brandon Sanderson’s Youtube Channel

If you don’t know who Brandon Sanderson is it is likely that you have an aversion to huge books. The man writes at an incredible speed and doesn’t seem to be stopping any time soon. My favorite book series of his is the Stormlight Archive – you should check it out.

Brandon’s channel has a plethora of writing tips and advice. He teaches creative writing at Brigham Young University and I found his videos both helpful and encouraging in my first attempt at a novel back in 2018. He has recently posted a more up-to-date and high-quality lecture series from his class.

EDIT: A reader reached out with a suggestion for an additional resource she felt was good for young writers. After reviewing I agree! I think it has useful information! Thanks Anna! Money Saving Guide for Authors and Writers

That’s all for now. If you are an aspiring author and found these useful feel free to reach out! I’d love to connect with you.

Thanks for reading!